Wednesday, February 22, 2006

 

The 'X' mark.

Samayam: 02:20 hrs
Place: Peru teliyani chinna Railway Station
Frame sarigga fit avvaka addadiddanga tirugutunna fan shabdham,train aaginappati nissabdhaanni chedinchindi...
Middle berth tho padukunna nenu, Station peremito choodataniki kitiki sandulonunditongi choose vifala prayatnam chesaa..
Nenu padukunna vaipu antaa cheekati gaa undi. Chinna Railway station avvatam vallaitu vaipu platform emi ledu.
Nidra lechaaka, fan shabdham ekkuva anipinchi malli nidra pattatledu..Train loni migata 71 mandi maanchi nidralo unnaru.
Sahajangane kutuhalam ekkuva motaadulo unde naku, train ee station lo asalenduku aagindi ane anumaanam vachhindi..
Plaform meediki digaanu., akkadakkadaa naalaage nidrapattani kontamandi platform meedanunchuni cigarette tagutunnaru...
30-40 metres yedam maintain chestunna vidyut deepalu platform ni illuminate cheyyataniki, bollywood heroine ontini cover cheyyataaniki try chestunna dresses laa, try chestunnayi.
Evaro maatallo train engine lo edo fault undi, repair cheyyadaniki inka 15 minutes time padutundi ani anukuntunte vinnanu.
Sarele ee time lo alaa okasari tirigi vaddam ani melliga train ki dooranga nadavatam start chesaa...
anni chinna railway stations laagane, ee station kooda main ooriki konchem dooranga kattabadi undi.Dooranga, akkadakkadaa minuku minuku mantoo chinna chinna lights kanipinstunnayi...
Pedda pedda cities ki dooranga unde vaalla lifestyle ela untundo anna aalochanala madhya kaasepu nannu nenu marchipoyaa...
intalo sudden ga train horn vinipinchindi..venakki tirigi chooste, train ki baagane dooranga vachhesanu...
Train kadilindi...
Train ki anta dooranga vachhina nannu nenu tittukunenta time kooda ledu...
Shakthinantaa koodagattukuni train vaipu parugettatam start chesaa..appatike train konchem speed andukundi....
chaala yella kindata kattina platform kanna train dwaaram chaala height lo undi...
choostunnantalone last bogie nannu cross chestoo vellipoindi..train venaka unna 'X' mark, danger signal choopistunnattu anipinchindi...
Train lo unna maa vaallaki call cheddamani cell bayataku teesanu...
Damn it..eppatilaagane no signal....
Okksaarigaa bhayam, naameeda naake kopam tarvaata em cheyyalo teliyani ayomayamlaanti emotions tho kallalo neellu tirige samayam lo oka oohinchani sanghatana jarigindi...
"Ravi", antoo bhujam meeda oka cheyyi...Ulikki padi venakku chooste .."Yentasepu moddu nidra????" antoo maa amma kanipinchindi...:D...

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Gosh!!!

loooved tis post!!!
aha kallaku kattinattuga entha baaga cheppav ra!!
chinappudu telugu text book loni prose chadhuthunna feeling vacchindhi..

amazing one!!
by the wayz i sumhow end up sensing al the suspense b4 the ending itself *sob*sob*
newayz thoroughly njoyed reading tis post!!

7:27 AM
 
mastaarooo u have made it to my
*hall of fame*
(feel blessed now !!:P)
 
hey even i tried a similar kinda flick a few weeks back :) if interestd chk my previous post named " hours of darkness"...kani overall ga baga raasav :)
 
sweet blog..i cud imagine the whole scene...and iam innocent:P
 
Awesome!
 
Awesome blog dude!!!
 
khatarnak vundhi nee blog.
telugu lo raasinandhuku inka anandam gaa vundhi...
 
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