Monday, February 27, 2006

 

The Sangfroid Konark - A love story.

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Maa oollo maa pedanaaanna gari abbayi pelli attend ayyi Palasa lo train ekkanu.
Srikakulam lo Rambabu gadu nannu join ayyentavaraku konchem bore kottina, tarvaata
vaadi non-stop nonsense vinadam kante aa boredom ye better anipinchindi...:D
...
Rambabu.
Emani cheppanu veedu gurinchi??
Veedi daggara anni questions ki answers untayi.
avi correctaa kaada annadi vere vishayam anukondi...
vaalla nannagariki unde rice mill laga eppudoo veedi noru run avutune untundi...kani veedu one of my best friends..
choodadaniki konchem mass ga kanipinchina manishi manchodu...
Konark express Vizag vachhesariki sayantram 5:25 ayyindi.appatidaaka maa mundu seats khaalee ga unnayi.Vizag lo evaranna manchi ammayi vaste bagundu manasulo anukuntu unnanu..:P
Rambabu, Ethiopia lo average rainfall ki ammayila andaaniki unde connection gurinchi
edo chebutoo unnadu...vichitramemitante, nenadi vintunnanu....:D
Train aagina oka 10 nimushalaki oka family maa mundu seats loki vachharu..
Uncle ki oka 45-50 years madhya untundi. Baaga height undi chaala dignified ga unnaru.Pedda nuduru tanu chaala telivaina varu ani cheppakane chebutundi.
Aunty kooda 40 or there abouts undochhu. Chaala simple ga unnaru.Okka maatalo
cheppalante cotton cheera kattukunna Kanakamahalakshmi laa , choodagane dannam
pettelaa unnaru.
Ikapote third member. Nenu anukunnatte, ammayi..:).
Andamaina ammayi.
Oka 18-20 madhya lo undochhu.
Maanchi color. Pedda pedda kallu, sharp ga unna mukku , kavulu varninchetanta
andamaina pedaalu...vaati pakkane dishti chukkalanti chinni beaty spot...choodagane
evaraina malli inkosaari choodalanipinchelaa undi aa ammayi.
Veetinannintiki minchi aakattukune amsam emitante, thana attitude.Chinna chirunavvu chedaranivvakunda unna "evarni pattinchukonu" ane carelessness,
Jeans-T Shirt lo unna kooda Telugutanam uttipade some mesmerizing feature and to top it all ,Udayistunna sooryudi tholi vekuva kiranam laanti chinni 'Mukku Pudaka'.
Maavadiki ivevi pattaledu sarikada, vadi geography knowledge gurinchi inka chebutune
unnadu...
Naku theliyakundane , ee family ni impress cheddam ane chinna aalochana already naa
mind loki vachhhesindi.
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"Evandi, neella bottle khaleega undi station lo konchem teesuku rakoodadu??" ani aunty
garu cheppagane, train kadile time ayyindi, next station lo pattukovacchule ani uncle chepparu.
Naku ventane aa situation lo oka oppurtunity kanipinchundi.
Nenu testaanu ani cheppelogaane, tane adigesindi , konchem water teesukostara babu
ani.
Danidemundandi, ila ivvandi, teesukuvasta ani bottle teesukuntunna time lo,
maa Rambabu gadu, "Yera indaaka nenu water teesukurara ani adigithe kaallu noppi ani
cutting ichhav?? Ippudemo......"
vaadi sentence poorthi ayyelopu already poina paruvuni salvage chesukodaniki,"Ippudu taggipoindi lera.."ani covering ichhanu...
Postcard ki sarigga atukkoni stamp gurtochhindi, naa covering technique chooste...:)**************************************************************************************
Nenu neellu testoo undaga maa vaadu suddenga na cell ki missed call ichhadu.
Cell bayataki teese prayatnam lo bottle cheyyi jari pattalameeda padindi,Vachhina avakaasam cheyyi jaarindi ane vishayanni symbolic ga chebutoo...
Nenu inko Mineral water bottle koni teesuku vachhi Jarigindi cheppanu..Edo mohamaatam
kosam 'Parledu babu, ippudu malli enduku konnav?' ani annaru.Daaniki maa vadu sarle aunty, "ippude return chesesi vastam.." ani annadu.Naku navvalo edavaalo ardham avvaledu.
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Idilaa undaga, train bayaluderindi..aa ammayi edo crossword puzzle solve chestoo
magazine lo nimagnam ayipoindi.
Tanato conversation elaa start cheyyalo ardham kavadam ledu.
Intalo aa ammayi vaalla naannagaritho, "Fidel Castro evaru??" ani adigindi.
Vaalla naanna garu konchem aalochinchi ,"emo ra, teliyadu.Meekemaina telusaa?" ani
mammalni adigaru.Maa vadu anavasaram ainappudu adakkundaane yadava information antaa istuntadu, ilaa avasaramainappudu matram bellam kottina rayalle silent ayipoyaadu.
"Adi, maremo, Fidel castro ante Belgium ki chendina fidel vaadakude kadara??"ani naku question divert chesaadu.Naku teliyadu ani chepte already coffin lo kappettina naa impression ki final meku kottesinatte.Nenu neellu namulutoo, em cheppalo ardham kaaka aalochistundaga,
"Fidel Castro, the dictator of Cuba, transformed his country into the first communist
state in the Western Hemisphere." antoo venukanundi oka voice ,google lo kottina
request ki reply laa vachhindi.Venakki tirigi choodagane, oka iravairendella Kurradu chinnaga navvutoo tananu introduce chesukuntunnadu...
"Sorry guys, ilaa sudden ga entry ichhinanduku,by the way, naa peru Hemanth. Vizag lo
train ki late ayyi inko compartment lo ekkanu, If you don't mind naa place
nakistaara??" ani nannu adigaadu.Veedevadraa babu ani manasulo anukuntoone pakkaku Jarigaanu.Ippudu aa ammayi aa abbayiki exact opposite ga undi.
Ika ee abbayi vishayaniki vaste, choodataniki baaga chaduvukuntunna vadila unnadu.Jebu lo Shades, Red color T Shirt, Blue Jeans lo manchi built tho Cinema Herolaa
unnadu...Anta tough ga kanipinchina atani face lo edo chinna amayakatvam tanani
marikaasta attractive ga kanipinchelaa chestundi.
Entry thone Hero garu mana Heroine daggara manchi markulu kottesaadu..:(
Tanichhina Jawabuki aa ammayi Konchem aashcharyam marikoncham appreciation tho oka
choopu visirindi..Adento kani Jeevtham lo chaala yella tarvaata chinna J e a l o u s feeling...
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Train Samarlakota daatindi. ee madhyalo mana hero gadi vivaralu koopi laagamu.REC Warangal lo CSE lo final year student. Sonta ooru Vizag. Ippudu college ki return
avutunnadu.
Timepass kosam edo discuss chestoo unnam.Maatala sandarbham lo Govt employees gurinchi
topic vachhindi."Ee govt employees antaa intey, assalu pani cheyyaru. Time dorikite dabbulu
nokkataniki choostaru. Assalu badhyata undadu..." antoo nenu modalupettanu.
Daaniki Hemanth, "Alaa kadu Ravi, alaa generalise cheyyadam correct kadu.Vaallallo
majority alaa undochhu kani andaru alaa untaru anatam samanjasam kadu" ani annadu.Tarvaata nakenduko oka doubt vachhi, Uncle ni adigesaanu."Meeru em chestuntaru?" ani.
"Roads and Bulidings shaaka lo General Manager." ani cheppadu.Naaku naa moham ekkada pettukovaalo ardham kaaledu..Appativaraku ardham avvaledu, aa ammayi naa statement ki response ga ichhina look ki meaning kopam ani...
chasss..Jeevitham..
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Ilaa prati discussion lonu mana Heroki manchi markulu padutoone unnayi..naa Duradrustaniki naa meeda naake jaali vesindi..:(
maa Rambabu prastutam, Hitler ki battatala rakunda undataaniki em chesevaadu, ane
thokkalo vishayam meeda lecture istunnadu.Nenu virakthigaa navvukunna..
Naa J factor pakkana pedithe, Hemanth ni third person ga undi Judge cheste, Tanu chaala Sensitive and sensible ani cheppochhu.Modern ga unna, peddalaku tanu ichhe gauravam chooste tana samskaram ento telustundi.Ade vishayam Uncle and Aunty faces lo kooda reflect ayyindi.
In the meanwhile Night avvadam valla challagali start ayyindi. Kitiki close cheyyadaniki aa ammayi try chestundi.Chaala rojula nundi close cheyyakapovadam vallaanta easy ga kitiki moosukodam ledu.
Hemanth, "nenu help chesta undandi" ani munduku bend ayyi window ni close cheyyatanikitry chestundaga, aprayatnamga vaalliddari choopulu kalisayi. aa fraction of second lokonni vela lakshala messages transfer ayyinattu iddari kallalo chinna merupu.
aa okka choopu vaalliddarijeevithalani yelanti malupulu thipputundo chooddam...
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Dinner time ayyindi.Vaallu intinundi prepare chesukunna food items open chesi dinner start chestoo, meeru kooda share chesukondi babu ani offer chesaru Aunty.
Nenu, mohamaatam kosam, "Vaddulendi , memu next station lo tiffin edaina chestaam."ani annanu.
Maa Rambabu matram, "OK aunty naku pettandi, maavadu okkade tarvati station lo tiffin chestadu." antoo aunty chetiloni items ni andukunnadu.Naku maa vadi chinnapilladi manastatvam choosi ela react avvalo react avvalo teliyani paristithi.
Maa vadu continue chestoo, "Ravi gadu alaage antadu kani aunty, aa Chapathi ilaa andukondi, nenu pedatanu vaadiki." antoo migata rendu chapaathilu kooda teesukunnadu.Aa ammayi matram, "Naku aakali veyyadam ledu.Chaala heavy ga undi.nenu tarvaata tintanu." ani cheppi Kitiki vaipuki tirigi poindi.Appude Hemanth tanakosam techhukunna Fruits aa ammayiki offer chesadu.Vaalliddari Body language lo teda gamaninchadaniki meeku aatte samayam pattadu.
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Konark express matram ivevi pattinchukokunda ala munduku sagipothonne undi...
Nenu maa vadu middle and upper berths lo padukunnam.
Lower berth lo Hemanth, and exact ga opposite berth lo aa ammayi padukunnaru.
Vaallidariki elaa undo teliyadu kani, naku matram nidra pattadam ledu.
aa nalugu jatala kallu madhya messages traffic ki etuvanti addankulu levu.Eppudo inter lo chadivina soothram,"annitikante balamaina forces Nuclear forces" farce la thochindi.ammayi choopuki minchina force ee viswam lo inkoti ledu annadi physics oppukoleni vaastavam...
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Morning 5 ayyesariki Khammam vachhindi.Warangal ravataniki inka 2 hours pattochhu.Anduke Hemanth kooda fresh up ayyi middle berth close chesesadu. Rambabu matram gurru petti pai berth lo padukune unnadu.
Summer kaavadam valla Sunrise tondaragane ayyi aa ammayi and migata vaallu kooda nidra lechaaru.
kitikeelonundi veechhe gaaliki atu itu egurutunna tana kurulani control cheyyataaniki kastapadutunna aa ammayikesi chlipi ga choostoo, allariga vekkirinchadu Hemanth.Antey elegance tho hair ni alaa free ga vadilesindi aa ammayi..
intalo tana hair clip cheyyi jari kinda padindi.Adi andukodaniki mundu vangina aa ammayi hair adetime lo munduku vachhina Hemanth medalo vesukunna Locket ki chikkukundi. aa galiki podavaati tana hair, atani face ki rasukundi. Ee sari vaalla choopula sangamam lo marintha lothu undi. Iddariki kaasepu baahya prapancham tho sambandhalu tegipoyaayi.
aa position lo iddaru, okari swaasa inkokaru feel ayyenta daggara lo unnaru.
Sudden ga aa maikam nundi melakuva loki vachhi iddaru vaari vaari places loki sardukunnaru.

Idilaa undaga, ee story ki mugimpu elaa untundo anna aatram naalo marintha ekkuvayyindi.Iddaru choopulu aithe exchange chesukunnaru kani, phone numbers lantivi emi exchange chesukoledu. Karanam vaalla vaalla parents paina vaallaki unde gauravam/bhayam anukunta...
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Intalo train Warangal station loki raane vachhindi.
Tana bag sardukuni ready ga unnadu Hemanth.Iddari faces lonu vidipothunnam ane feeling valla vachhe baadha kanipistundi.
Railu prayanam lo modalayye chaala parichayaallagane veella parichayam kooda end aipothundi anna feeling naake badha kaliginchindi...
Train aagindi.
Hemanth face loni Dejection kanipettadaniki meeru Pyschiatrist avvanavasaram ledu.Andariki bye cheppi digipothunnadu.
Train digaaka kooda kitiki daggariki vachchi maato kaasepu matladadu.Train kadilenduku sidhhanga undanna Railway announcement vinna aa ammayi face lo desperation.
Kallalo sannati neeti pora karigi buggameedaku jaaraka munde tudichesukundi.
Train kadilindi.
Platform paina undi train kanipinchenta varaku Hemanth chetini wave chestune unnadu.Konark express matram ivevi pattinchukokunda ala munduku sagipothoone undi...
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P.S: Induloni patralu (Nenu minaha) Sannivesalu anni kalpithalu.Any resemblances with any character living or dead is purely coincidental.

Comments:
LOL...
it will make a gr8 filmi script...:P

edhaina telugu magazine ki pampincharaadhu :p :P..
but seriously very well written...

asalu ekkada bore kottaledhu even though i cud guess most of the story still it had the cop to engage me through out the story..
gud one abbaih!!
 
deenine "mutchataina masterpiece" antaru emo.....

u have a nice descriptive style.....
 
lolz
story chala bagundi.. rohini annatu edhiana magazine ki pampinchu :)
 
naadho doubtuuu....

nee real stories..reel stories anni trains lone endhuku jaruguthunnayi??.. :D
 
meeru comments lo fundoo narration ante compliment emo anukunnanu...
mee blog chadivana tarvatha adi vekkirintha ani telisindhi..

meeru amazing...
 
asalu first of all..antha peddha blog antha opika ga raasinandhuku hats off... and antha peddha blog aina kuda..ekkada bore kottaledhu...description n detailing adhirindhi...kaani adhi story ani nenu sense chesesa..endhukante nijam ayyi unte nuvvu antha chance icche vaadivi kaadhu hemanth ki :P:P
 
too much raasaru mastaru..adurs!
mee character matram character artist la aipoyindi..
 
ee kadha lo screenplay adhbutamga undi. nene konark express lo veltu ee sanghatana antha choosi nattu anipinchindi. manasu hattu kune chakkati chikkati telugu padalatho kurchabadindi... intaka mundu kondaru cheppinattuga tappakunda edaina patrikaki pampinchandi.

Krishna
 
hey ravi,
check out www.golusukatha.blogspot.com
i'm sure you'll like it.
 
$ aa...velakattalem boss nee kathaki.. :D
 
:(( 5 am ra time ippudu :((

edo bore kotti blogs chaduvudam ani modalettanu chadvatam! interesting ga unte motham chadivithe chivarlo alanti p.s. pedathava :((

i deeply hurted.

and getting over that,

nice story writing style yo :)
 
chala bagundi mastaru, meeru Oka movie story rasinattu rasaru.

keep it up.. nijanganee magazine pampinchi chudandi...
 
Hi Ravi ! I am impressed. I love movies and always wanted to write scripts and some stories.Your story n the way u did pen your thoughts down was very impressive.keep it up..! i'd like to make u my buddy Dude..! konchem raasina chaala baaga present chesaavu.
 
Hi Ravi ! I am impressed. I love movies and always wanted to write scripts and some stories.Your story n the way u did pen your thoughts down was very impressive.keep it up..! i'd like to make u my buddy Dude..! konchem raasina chaala baaga present chesaavu.
 
wow..!
story chaduvutunnatasepu nenukda trainlo vunnattugane anipinchindi...!!
 
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